And now for part 2 of the story! Remember, if anyone else wants to join us in writing this story, email me at cheryl.brooks52@yahoo.com and I'll send it to you. You can then add another 500 words or so and email it back to me. I will edit the excerpts and post them in order along with your favorite hunk from the month of April.Mia's Men: Part II
by Hunky Buns Inspector Ana
He looked at her quizzically and then spoke up again. “Then what is your name?”
She was trying not to look down but couldn’t help it. Her eyes were betraying her. Hearing his voice snapped her back to attention. “What? Oh. I am Mia—Mia of, uh, everywhere.” She had been all over and couldn’t think of a place to call “home”, not anymore. Her mind stopped wandering and she looked up in surprise as the man stepped closer. What was he doing?
“You have…A distinct smell…” he stepped within a couple of inches of her and her eyes began to dart down again. The man had an amazing body with rippling muscles and she wanted to touch all over. She felt her body warming up and she hadn’t reacted to a male like this in quite some time. He reached forward and she shivered lightly as he sniffed at her neck.
“W-What are you d-doing?” Was that her voice? It sounded all scratchy and dry. Her heart was beating faster and she was trying not to pant.
“You have a distinct smell, like sweet graras.”
“What are those?” she asked and her cheeks flushed a little when he sniffed up to her ear. She should be pushing him away or backing away herself, but her feet were planted to the spot. Her body was practically begging for more and she didn’t know how well she could resist.
He pulled away a little and tilted his head before circling her slowly. He reminded her of a predator, and even though she was the prey, she was enjoying his attention quite a bit. “A grara is a sweet food we eat on Craton,” he replied. “We do not have those luxuries here.” He stopped behind her and she gasped softly as he sniffed along her shoulder.
She couldn’t take the heat anymore. She stepped back and looked up at him. “Look Lucern, I don’t understand what’s going on here but I don’t know how sniffing me is going to help me.”
“I did not mean to offend you Mia, I was simply curious. We have not seen a female in quite some time.”
“I can tell.” she murmured after glancing down again. “And wait a minute, you keep mentioning “we” over and over again. Who is this we you’re talking about?”
He smiled and looked behind him. “There are more of us Mia. We were not sure whether you be foe or friend so I appeared to check.”
“Uh huh. Well, I won’t disturb you anymore so if you’ll excuse me.” She turned to go back to her pod but then gasped in surprise as he stepped in front of her. “Look, you seem like a very nice man, but I need to find shelter and some food.”
“You need not look. We will take care of you.”
“At what price? I’ve learned things in this life aren’t free.” she said honestly then blinked as he grinned at her. Her eyes widened lightly and she took another step back. “Your teeth…Some are sharp…Why?”
18 comments:
Nice job, Ana!
Wow I feel like, in awe.
LOL! I'm sure Lucern will take VERY good care of Mia!
Great job, Ana!
Congrats Ana!
It was really good and of course your in awe with all those alien hunky buns to inspect. LOL!
LOL! I probably should have posted that picture of "Ana" with all those hunky-bun guys to go with her post. Maybe next time...
I'll be gone all day today, so I'll check back in this evening.
In the meantime, have fun!
Thanks Cheryl. Hope you have a good Day!
Great job, Ana! I'm anxious to meet the "others" just as much as Mia is!
:)
Yeah!!! Ana, Good Job!!!
The story is heating up. And I can see things getting interesting with these hunky-buns.
Have a good day with your son Cheryl.
Ana, this is great! LOL at the "Mia of everywhere" thing. I'm impressed!! You could cut the sexual tension with a knife:-)
Awesome job Ana!
I'm wondering what the "sharp teeth" are for too?
Great work ladies, I will look forward to the next installment of "Mia's Men".
Best Regards
L
Nicely done Ana!
:o)
Ladies,
Things are starting to look up here.
Reading these two chapters. My head is actually fantasing Hugh Jackman (Wolverine) looking at Mia. He'd turn me on too.
Doesn't it make you wonder what those "sharp teeth" are for too?
Hey gang,
Looks like everyone is getting into the story, and it heats up even more with Donna's excerpt!
In other news, I got the T-shirts today, Leslie, and they're really cool! I'll get them off to the rest of you as soon as I can.
Welcome to the blog, Lea! It's great to have you here and I hope you'll stop by again!
YAY! That's good news Cheryl! Have you try yours on? I do hope that they fit everyone okay.
Donna I also want to know what those "sharp teeth" are for so if you ever find out don't forget to share it with us! Ooooh I know lets ask Cheryl. They are her boys and she knows them better than anyone.
So Cheryl do you know what the "sharp teeth" are for?
Hey, I'm not the one who gave them the sharp teeth! You'll have to wait and see....*evil laugh*
I tried on my shirt, Leslie, and it fits.
I just watched Wolverine!!!!
OMG is he a Hot Wild Hunk of a Man.
I think all guys should wear their Hair like Hugh.
So Sexy!!!
P.S. I liked the Movie.
But it didn't end The way I wanted.
I have to recover now.
It took alot out of me.
Until tomorrow. When we might find out who or what else Mia meets in the Purple Forest.
I do SO need to see that movie! Since tomorrow is Mother's Day AND my DH's birthday, I think I might be able to talk the gang into it. Now if I could just remember where I put his birthday cards... Actually, I'm not sure I made it out of the store with them. I have no memory of getting them out of the bag when I got home. A mind is a terrible thing to lose....
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