I wrote quite a bit on Fugitive last night, finally getting over that 70,000 word mark. Yay!! Only 20,000 more to go! *sigh* I'm writing this one differently than the others, and I think it has to do more with writing in third person than anything. With a first person story, you might start off with a little jump to some sort of teaser that actually occurs later in the book, or you might stop and tell a little backstory, but once you begin the meat of it, it pretty much falls chronologically after that. In third person, however, you have several points of view going at the same time, and it's sometimes difficult to know where to place them. For example: whose version of time span A-B do you write first? Can you jump ahead and write a later chapter if you aren't sure where you're going next? Or should you take one point of view and follow it through to the end, then write another and splice them together? I'm not sure how most other writers do that, and it isn't something I felt the need to know until now. I'm not an English major by any means, and creative writing was a sideline until recently. Writing nurse's notes is chronological, but factual, and there's very little call for writing dialog, which is what I prefer to write. I drift into narrative from time to time, but probably less than I did in first person. I may be a published author, I still don't really consider myself a seasoned professional. I just do it the way it feels right to me, and then my editor makes suggestions. It's all a learning process. I'm better than I was, but not as good as I could be. I don't think anyone ever is.
In other blog news, I have a hard time thinking in Pacific time since I don't live there, so I reset the time zone to Eastern Time, which means that posts will go up earlier than they have in the past.
4 comments:
Hi Cheryl,
Congrats on closing in on the finish. I'm almost to 80K in my WIP and it's a good feeling to be getting close to the end of a book that has taken me WAY too long to write!
One thing I'd recommend as a third person writer is don't jump ahead. Write it chronologically. I find that when I am looking forward to a big scene that's coming down the road it always comes together better when I write it "in the moment" that it needs to occur in the story. That gives it time to build up for you as the writer so you're experiencing it the same way the reader will. Sometimes it's painful to hold off and wait, but the end result is always better in my humble opinion.
Good luck finishing Fugitive!
Hi Marie,
You know, the funny thing is that I've noticed that by jumping ahead, I haven't REALLY jumped ahead because my brain already knows what will happen in between, it just hasn't jelled or something, or it's like a jigsaw puzzle with a missing piece. One problem I'm finding with writing to a deadline is that I don't have the luxury of letting it work its way out; I have to keep writing and write down ideas as they come to me.
All right, I'm now green with envy. I have three chapters done on my WIP. Granted, it's still a proposal and not sold, but it's always hard to see the finish line from here. *sigh*
I write chronologically, like Marie. It screws me up to jump around. But lots of people do the same thing as you, Cheryl, with no adverse effects. You're probably just fine to do whatever feels right. I agree on the deadline issue...I had some nasty writer's block with the last book, and finishing just about killed me. I have a couple pictures of me from that time period. I may burn them. Because seriously, ew.
Congrats on moving closer to the finish line!
Hi Kendra,
You know, back before I was published, I just wrote all the time. If an idea came into my head, I'd write it, and if nothing came to me, it was no skin off anyone's nose. Now it's more specific in terms of time and topic, which is much harder to do. Guess that's what happens when you turn your hobby into a business deal. As soon as I finish this one, I've got to get started on the next one, so I don't think there will be any break coming soon, and I refuse to let ANYONE take pictures!
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